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Hi Thomas great layout. I think you did a good job on describing the characters, next time you could add quotes from the book to back up your descriptions of them. Your plot summary is okay but it still needs more detail, for instance does Dennis get teased because he is wearing dresses? Does he wear them when he is playing football?? With your making connections it was great to see you do self to the world (but I think you meant text to self) where you connected with the character Dennis through your love of football. Next time I would expect you to also do text to text and text to the world and you also need to add more detail into your connections. For instance Dennis loves playing football for his school I know this because in the book it says....(write a quote from the book here that proves your thinking). I also love playing football and I use to play it at my old school.